[15] Line 376 – Where did the variance of 0.15 come from? Does this agree with the experimental data? [16] Line 395 – What is meant by “pre-culture”? [17] Line 419 – What is meant by “standard”? [18] Line 482 – “marginally significant” – The phrasing of these results in the conclusion on line 499-500 seems more appropriate.
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